Somar,

Line me up behind Josie (what she said!) and Pat. Very cool.

I had trouble catching a few of the words. The vocal sits well in the mix, but it might be brought up a bit, perhaps.

The "build" of instruments was nice. Bringing the drums in late worked really well.

You, obviously, are not "new at this" (the writing or the production). Keep 'em coming...

floyd