Bob,

I enjoyed Maybe She's a lot. I especially like the imagery of your lyrics here.

The sound of your voice works well with the very nice tune.

Overall sounds great. For me the song would flow better without the extended La-la, na-na portion.

I would do one line of la-s and one of na-s then to the last verse. Because your lyrics are so compelling I wanted to get to the final verse sooner.

Just one opinion out of a possible 7,088,211,000 and counting.