Hi Curt,

I think this is a good Gospel song.

The one little nit I have is the mixed language styles in the lyrics - "careth" formal hymn type language and "gettin'" informal country Gospel language. So it's confusing me what your song wants to be - hymn or song.

The message is good, your singing is fine and it's going to be a solid song when you're finished redoing your production as you stated in your post.

It'll be even better, imo, if you'll straighten out your lyrical focus. For example say "cares" instead of "careth". If you disagree please just disregard. It's only a suggestion trying to help.