Originally Posted By: boehm
Hi Joanne,

I like the background.
Why don't you just change the key up a little, so that it fits
your voice better.
Noel's idea with the additional line is not bad. I would suggest
a little break between verse an chorus, too, so that the words
"cold" and "will" don't hang together.
Just a suggestion.

Guenter



I agree with all of the above suggestions by Noel and Guenter. BTW, I think you have a fine singing voice Joanne, this just sounds like the key is a bit too low.