Sounds good! You might want to bring the instrumentals a bit forward in the mix.

You emphasize the rhythm by breaking syllables on a lot of words ("thankful", "precious", "every", "very", "family"), and it fits the style well. Still, I would have liked the vowels held instead.

Nice work! smile
-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?