Nice job.

The lead was really rocking. I might would have brightened it a bit and kicked it up a few db.

You say rock...... nahhhh.... I say country. Have you been listening to the stuff coming out of Nashville in the past so many years? This fits right into what is now called country. Pick up the tempo a bit.... get an attitude.... and sing this baby. I could hear any number of the new male singers covering this.

Hoping I'm not stepping in it here..... I'd do a rewrite on some of the lines. (no I'm not telling you which ones) I think someof them are a bit to "pretty" where as this should be a gritty, attitude filled rant about a cheating no good tramp who was thrown out the door.... IMHO... you have an excellent idea here.... refine it.

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