Bob,

You've really out-done yourself with this one. It's incredibly haunting. Like floyd, I'm singing it in my head now as I type. Just wow!!!!!

Writing, arranging, performing and mixing - all top notch and then some!!!

My personal favourite was the first verse rhyme pattern of "Title a a a a Title" and the back-heavy lines you used for the lyrics where you started the lyric phrases mid-bar and ended on beat 1. These touches of writing genius were outstanding at setting the mood for what's to follow.

'Endless Days' was a real pleasure to listen to.

All the best,
Noel


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