Bob... man I really loved the verses in that song. Melody and lyric in the perfect match up. Great job on that.

I tend to get into big trouble around here when I offer constructive crits on a great song like this ... so I'll PM my thoughts to avoid getting slammed here.

Loved, loved, loved, the verses.


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