Hi Richard,

This is a great effort given that you've been writing a song every couple of days for FAWM. I'm impressed.

The chorus really appealed to me. Lyrically I thought it was very strong. The rhyme burst/church in the last verse made me smile, too. That's very inventive!

All the best with FAWM,
Noel


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