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Hi Rob and Anne-Marie, This is a really beautiful song. No-one on this forum can work those minor modes as skillfully as you do. It's always a pleasure to listen to your compositions. Because you asked for comments ... One thing that got caused me to ponder a bit, after I listened, was the use of the two different points of view in the lyrics. This is unusual. For some of the song, the point of view is first-person narrative (using pronouns I/me/my/mine and she/her/hers and they/them/theirs. The perspective then changes to third-person narrative (using pronouns he/him/his and she/her/hers and they/them/theirs). I found myself wondering whether or not you'd tried the lyrics with a consistent point of view. To my ears, first-person narrative throughout is very strong (that his replace he/him/his with I/me/my/mine). Maybe that's just me, though. If you're interested, below is how the lyrics read when they are consistently first-person narrative and consistently third-person narrative (just in case you're interested). FIRST-PERSON NARRATIVE oh it's true that old habits die hard don't put 'm on the playlist, delete 'm up front I once had the girl in my arms looking mighty fine, sure made me shine
silent warnings, whispering my name wrong behavior covering up her pain
soon I became another man flying in the night, trying to make things right sure leaving some broken hearts behind knowing fully why, they were not my kind
Striking silent whispering her name knowing darn well, she came and left my life
I once had a girl she was leaving me far behind, to the other side still working my way back to her and my frame of mind, that left me blind
silent warnings whispering my name wrong behavior to cover up her pain living silent all the games we played knowing darn well she came and left that day
She left that day
THIRD-PERSON NARRATIVE oh it's true that old habits die hard don't put 'm on the playlist, delete 'm up front he once had the girl in his arms looking mighty fine, sure made him shine
silent warnings, whispering his name wrong behavior covering up her pain
soon he became another man flying in the night, trying to make things right sure leaving some broken hearts behind knowing fully why, they were not his kind
Striking silent whispering her name knowing darn well, she came and left his life
he once had a girl she was leaving him far behind, to the other side still working his way back to her and his frame of mind, that left him blind
silent warnings whispering his name wrong behavior to cover up her pain living silent all the games they played knowing darn well she came and left that day
She left that day
The above are just my thoughts. Please feel completely free to throw them in the trash can (or rubbish tin as we say in Australia). There's no changing the fact that you both write and perform absolutely stunning music! All the best, Noel
MY SONGS...Audiophile BIAB 2024
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