Hi Dani, the biggest thing for me listening to this is that there is too much harmony going on through the whole song with the exception of a small part about a quarter way in. When you sing with just your straight voice I can understand the lyric better and I think it would make for a better result. You can put the harmony in at different places to accent the song. I don't mind the shuffle (one of my favorite styles) You have a nice voice on its own so showcase it. Just my 2 cents. Enjoyed listening, good job

Nelson