Nice retro rocker... jamming for sure.

I like the BGV echoing "when the sun goes down..."

the lead guitar is smoking.


EDIT: I wanted to listen on my cans before I commented...

Nice. I got it cranked and just the slightest hint of distortion on the mix. I heard more on the speakers but didn't want to blame the mix.

The one thing that I don't like is the fairly hard panning R&L on the tracks. In verse one.... on the R all I hear is bass, drums and vox..... on the L the mix is the same but also has a hard panned guitar. If you're gonna hard pan you really need something over on the other side to balance the mix. Another guitar, keys, something....

Nice job.

Last edited by Guitarhacker; 10/06/14 10:44 AM.

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