A very interesting write.

The guitars and vocals are well done. The "shouter" in the background was very effective. The drums are fairly "buried" in the mix. The harmonica is distracting (imo) - its blues vibe doesn't fit as well as a more country background harmonica might (or a dobro?)

Good job of getting all of that lyric into the song. It would have been nice to see that posted.

fj