Thank you everyone for the kinds words.

It is fun to see others writing songs for their child's wedding also.

Being a solo piano piece writer I never considered vocal range. All the music was complete and mixed before I started working on lyrics.

I agree that the vocal line needs to be moved up the scale. On top of the low vocal key signature I had taken Tylenol cold medicine for the previous 7 days. My vocal chords felt tight and I was short on breath. I was also nervous to sing.

Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to all.

I also listened to Fly. Very well done.

Regards,
Lance