Wow... what a mental picture THAT painted.... I think you probably should have included a line that placed this many years ago and while you were a 7 year old kid....

I'd think about a rewrite of the lyrics to make it fit clearly into the world of a 7 year old's playtime make believe. Adding that one thing puts it into the proper perspective.

Interesting song.


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