Originally Posted By: Jeff S
I'm not sure about channeling Hendrix but you have certainly found Tom Petty in the box. This needs some lyrics or maybe even another melodic instrument to add a bit of interest as the song progresses.

I also think the guitar as mentioned earlier needs to have a little more panning the other side. Not a lot but enough that it catches the other ear a bit as if the amp is just off center If that makes any sense.

Of course your the producer and only you know where you want to go with this and you got a great start. I don't comment a lot on songs because there are more people with a bit more experience than me but I dig this vibe and would like to see where you take this. We need more rock songs in the showcase.



@Jeff, thanks for the input. I'm working on the lyrics. I will keep consider the suggests as well.