Hey Will,

The metaphor "cloud of gloom" really stood out to me. It's a great expression.

I found the energy of your song contagious. As Tom says, "This one can get in your blood really quickly."

Because I'm not sure if you're seeking constructive criticisms, I'll hold back on any comments. You are definitely getting the hang of how to bring out the best in BIAB!

Regards,
Noel




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