Hi Richard,

I missed this one and I'm really glad that Patrick went fishing and pulled it back to the surface. This is great! There is so much to like about the story and the way you've told it. I agree with floyd. These lyrics are strong.

What really appealed to me was the "uproarius / glorious" rhyme. It's a very inventive word pairing.

All the best,
Noel




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