Excellent write, excellent performance.

I listened to Mix A for a few bars, but found the piano too bright and switched over to Mix B.

As floyd mentioned, I thought the vocal was too forward in the mix, and I would have liked it softened with some reverb.

It might be worth thinking about the vocals from a dynamics perspective as well. The entire song feels like it's sung at the same volume. It makes sense to punch the chorus up to that level, but given the personal nature of the lyrics, you might consider holding back a bit on the verse, both in volume and intensity.

Just a thought.

-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?