Originally Posted By: 90 dB
Originally Posted By: dcuny
I like it!

As others have mentioned, you've got some great lines in there.

I hesitate to mention it, but there's a glitch at 3:29 where the strings suddenly cut out for a moment.




David,

Thanks for listening, and so critically. grin

Actually, that's not a glitch. wink I pulled the strings there to bring the choir up, but I can hear that as a glitch too. It's too darned abrupt.
I'm surprised you didn't catch the warbling flutter in the piano track at the very beginning! laugh


Regards,

Bob


I did, but I figured you already knew about that flutter.... likely key transposing artifacts. I often will attempt to render the track a few times to see if it does anything different.

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