Thank you David,

Yes, that was quite a story about how my initial lyrics concept didn't make it ;-)

About the archaic phrasing, I actually like that in our songs (we don't want to please just the youngsters :-))

As for the change in tense, this is my style of songwriting, adding dynamics in the choruses.

Something completely different than: a musical friend of mine (Le Sixieme Jour) who has just created a new song with one of my sample packs also creates songs with vocaloid. However his best one so far is this one:

Song in My Mood

Check it out I think you'll like it (The video is gorgeous!)

Rob


We are Rob Meulman and Anne-Marie Bovenkamp from The Netherlands.

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC1gsdNLE7_Gy8qavoOplQow/videos
http://rnam.net/