Originally Posted By: dcuny

I wasn't trying to stir anything up... honest, guv'ner! smile

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I enjoyed the discussion, David...


Originally Posted By: Planobilly
Hi Floyd,

The vocal was good enough that, what every could have been done in structure differently does not much matter to me.

The lyrics paint a really good picture of the events that transpired. The "You'll never fall in love again" line was for me a good idea because it expressed the emotional pain of the situation and the fear of past failure and fear of the future.

The "things" she was packing up denoted a bit of sad memories and most likely some good memories, some mixed emotions as it were.

The "You'll never fall in love again" was a strong fear based function.

I would not change anything.

Good work, a good song. I need to go back and listen to some of your other songs to get a better idea of how you think.

Cheers,


Billy

Thanks, Billy... glad you stopped by...


Originally Posted By: JimFogle
Floyd,

I like the song. I don't normally listen to lyrics but I try to in your songs because I realize they are the reason for every Floyd Jane production.

You've captured the melancholy mood of separation very well.

I appreciate you having a listen, Jim...