Really nice.

My only disappointment was the chorus wasn't as big as I was expecting. It kinda started in that direction with the first few notes... then it inexplicably fell back into the range of the verse. The build up was perfect...... I was expecting something huge after all the mention of McBride as a singer for this.... MM would have taken the chorus melody into the stratosphere. And that's where it should go.

Still, this is superb in every way. I could see this in a Disney film as others have mentioned as it is right there.

Really nice writing.


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