David,

One thing is for sure, you perform with 200% commitment! The amount of energy you brought to the forum with this one is enormous.

From a craftsmanship perspective, I love the way your chorus moves lyrically; the rhyme scheme and the repetition are sensational. I have a feeling that if you could apply this song's format to a 21st century theme that appealed to women and men, old and young, you'd have a major hit on your hands!

All the best,
Noel
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