Wow, Mike.. this is AWESOME! There hasn't been a lot of work posted here in this genre, and this really shines! VERY polished in my opinion!

Your mix is crystal clear, the beat and cadence of the lyrics is totally hypnotic, and your singer absolutely NAILS the vocal style this genre normally adheres to!

I tend to agree with Guenter that the combination of highly sexualized lyrics with a playground melody is a bit disconcerting... But it is completely consistent with the genre's sexually charged content.

I really like your use of a single sax note at 1:27... it works as an exclamation point for everything that comes before it!

This is so good and so polished that I can actually see it taking off if you managed to get it into the right hands! GREAT job! Color me impressed!