Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Nice one, Fred.

Good lyric. Good production and pleasant vocal. A really nice listen.

floyd


I agree!! I do think this could be done a bit "harder"- A little edge and distortion on the EP/lead guitar, and a more aggressive vocal with more verb. There is an edge/harshness to the lyrics which I feel aren't fully sold with a more mellow arrangement. Still think it's very good! Take care. Greg