Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Kenny,

Another good write - the verses "make you think" and then the chorus just carries you away - and really stays with you! (I'm still hearing it in my head).

This one made me think of John Sebastian (after The Lovin' Spoonful) - that easy-going sway to the very singable chorus... (but, your sound is very much your own as a whole)

Always enjoy your music...

floyd


I agree with Floyd. Very nice!! I also hear the John Sebastian vibe. There is one minor nit for me. In the first verse, the last 2 lines have the same melody (3 notes I think) which repeat 4 times. I think the 4th one could be a little different. Very small issue. Still one of your biggest fans!! Take care. Greg


Great advice,
Thanks Greg