Herb and David,

The overarching sound that you've created via the arrangement and the mix is first class... spacious, powerful, and a great fit for the lyric content.

I thought that the VVCVCBC format was an excellent choice for the unfolding narrative (V=verse, C=chorus, B=bridge). I particularly liked the way you used the short interlude at the end of the bridge to set up the final chorus.

What really got me thinking was how you arranged the verse using essentially two chords and in what sounded like E natural minor to me. Then, when the chorus arrived, you launched into the relative major of G. The feeling and the lift that this key change carried with it was noteworthy. How you used instrumentation to capitalise on this is a credit to your arranging skills.

An excellent listen! I was mesmerised for the entire 4+ minute's journey.

Regards,
Noel

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Audiophile BIAB 2024