Been there, done that, got the T shirt!

I like it Ian. Very nice song. I would try a little harder to find some RTs to go with it. You could also try adding a bridge into it - a little change in the action makes a song so much more interesting. Or modulate the last chorus up a third.

Well done


Follow That Dream

Sam
Karaoke King

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Turning that corner again - I have to keep following that dream, no matter what