Hi again Ian

Yes I was defining "clunky" as awkward, but this only applies to one or two lines!

I take your point entirely as to the use of "approximate rhyming". Many established and highly esteemed songwriters do this quite a bit.

I’ve always understood “bite the dust” to mean die, but perhaps that’s just my erroneous interpretation. I guess a part of the protagonist dies with each failed relationship. So fair enough!

Wish you the best of luck getting these songs out to a broader audience and marketing them.

I’d be interested to here how you get on with taxi.com.