Steve,

You did a terrific job on this.

The backing tracks are well mixed. Nice balance between guitar/bass/drums.

It reminded me of early Green Day. A very appropriate vehicle for the lyric. The genre makes the too-low-to-sing-vocal "work".

Cool ending.

(For a track like this - heavy instruments - you can run the instrument mix through a good pitch shifter and bring it up a note or two in order to do a vocal when it's just a bit too low to sing to. Just a thought if you run into this in the future).

Enjoyed that!

fj