Originally Posted By: Tano Music
Hey David... I didn't mean to ask for Rapid feedback... I'll be on vacation for about a week and a half. Just looking for some things I can take action on by the time I get back. I'm not sure I like the way that it ends, I'm not sure that I like the way I combine solos at the end, I think in certain cases the lyrics might be too cute, those kinds of things.


Hey Tano,

This is very interesting from an artist "gut check" standpoint. I think you have answered your own questions. I learned long ago, that if I asked someone:

"Are the lyrics too confusing?" the answer was YES.

If I asked "Is the lead guitar solo too sloppy?" the answer was YES.

If I asked "Is the ending too choppy?" the answer was YES.

In other words, your gut will always make you ask questions on the very things that are bothering you, and if they are still bothering you, that is exactly what you need to work on.

I keep going over stuff, again and again and again and again, over and over and over until I can finally hear it play back and go:

"Yeah."

Make sense?

smile

David Snyder
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