David,

Those opening lines...

Quote:
A patchwork of bruises
and a suitcase that's fallin' apart

...are outstanding. Not only are they viscerally visual but they set the stage magnificently for what is to come.

I really enjoyed listening to this. The style was a great fit!

Yet another fine song to add to your songbook!

All the best,
Noel


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