Originally Posted By: gibson
Noel,
So this is what the song was supposed to sound like blush
A nice ballad.
One thing about your songs that make them so enjoyable to me is your explanations for the rhymes/flow etc. I always go "err??" as it so far removed from my way of working, but reminds me of English Literature at school and my wish I had paid more attention.

enjoyed

Alyn


Alyn,

Thanks for dropping in! It's great to see you again smile

You know, while I have a fairly well developed for rhyme and lyric flow these days (it's taken a long, long time), I'd love to have just a smidgen of your creativity. I reckon I could rule the world if I had that smile My work pales when I compare it to your version of these lyrics!

All the best!
Noel


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