"Brutally honest feedback welcome! :-)" That would require me to criticize what I cannot. I only wish that those who believe would actually believe, but there is a time and a purpose for everything.

I appreciate the intimacy of the voice (as an American, this includes the soft accent). There were a couple of chord changes that seemed abrupt to me, and may have been softened by some kind of "pad"...not sure what the organ did in this style. but...

The vocals may have been a bit too-upfront and be benefited by a light reverb and (if then needed) placing them a bit softer in the mix.

That's just THESE ears, however. I listened to the end and was moved to do so. So, at least for me, I think you succeeded.

BIAB 2021 Audiophile. Windows 10 64bit. Songwriter, lyricist, composer(?) loving all styles. Some pre-BIAB music from Farfetched Tangmo Band's first CD. https://alonetone.com/tangmo/playlists/close-to-the-ground