Originally Posted By: Tangmo
Great lines. "You're yawn is harmony". Now that's a love line.

Love the jazz vocal, progression, groove and vamping. Artful production as well. Really enjoyed the listen.
Tangmo, thank you very much.

Originally Posted By: Rustyspoon#
Very cool.
Love Fx. Busy, yet within grasp of attention.
Thank you. It was a delicate balance all the way.

Originally Posted By: Al-David
Hi Lawrence,

Holy crap - is this blistering good, or what? Busy but not cluttered - not at all easy to do. Totally vamp! Your vocal chops smooth over this like butter on hot bread. Your voicing reminds me a bit of Vic Damone. If you're anywhere close to my age, you might remember him!!

This is one of the coolest songs posted on the forum in quite some time. I've missed a few, but I'm willing to bet this ranks at or near the top for creativity, uniqueness and delivery. A tip of the hat and tons of kudos headed your way.

Alan
Alan, so glad to hear you enjoyed it!