Really well done!! Vocal is so passionate. Really good writing too. I read Floyd's comment and your response. I think you're right that it sort of rests on the singer's frame of mind.....get lost or come back? Having had an old girlfriend who drove me crazy with her flakiness, I relate to the What is wrong with you on a certain level. On the other hand, I see Floyd's point. Generally, where Floyd's input is involved, I have a 2 step thought process: 1) Floyd is probably right, and 2) See step 1. Very much enjoyed this...lots of great stuff here!! Take care. Greg