Leaving Home

I originally posted this in the forum a number of years ago, but always felt that the arrangement needed a little more attention. Finally got it where I want it. Comments/suggestions appreciated!

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I open doors and walk down halls
No more pictures on the walls
Just a cleared-out lonely place
Full of empty-echoing space

There's where all our children played
Here our toughest choices made
Up the stair our closest times
On the porch our summer wines.

You and I, we go back a long, long ways
You've been witness to our family's greatest days
And you helped me bear my hardest cross
Here, just you and I, in my deepest loss

With this final look around
I'm seeing memories, hearing sounds
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So goodbye, good home, my friend
I don't think we'll ever meet again

Life is in its quick retreat
I've a new home now to meet
Farewell my good home, farewell.
Good-bye!
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Style..I didn't use a BIAB style, just relied on the RT's to set the style.
RT: 811 Piano, Acoustic, Vancouver Pop
Midi: strings, pad, glock
Soundeffect: children's laughter

Last edited by Tano Music; 11/09/18 04:17 AM.