Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Loren,

Really nicely done! Very enjoyable listen.

The tracks sound "just right". The mix is excellent!

Smooth and Smokey.

I especially like the last verse:
"Plainly...
My fear of losing you was too extreme
But, now, I know it was only a dream
Nothing's coming to an end..."

Nice write.

Love your vocals! (Smooth and Smokey). We need to hear more from you...

fj


Mr. Floyd Jane...

I am particularly pleaseed with your approval of "the mix". It means you heard most of everything I wanted to you to hear!

I like the final verse, too. It sure was a relief for the poor, poor subject of the song after all those worrisome concerns he had about his woman's relationship to him!

Nice to hear a listener with "country" tastes in music finding something pleasurable to listen to in the genre of jazz.

Thanks for taking time with the song and for your considered comments.

Truly,

LOREN

"Music is what feelings sound like."-- borrowed from a Cakewalk Music Creator forum member, "Mamabear".