Originally Posted By: dcuny
Great arrangement, excellent write, smooth delivery and wonderful production.

I'm running out of superlatives, and it's only my second sentance!

I'm especially struck by the lyric - this is a great write. You start out with alliteration:

build bigger, better bombs
...
well, what is wrong (OK, wrong is only visually alliterative wink )

You end both verses with the country songwriting trick of reversing the meaning of a word by changing the context:

we ask "what is wrong with them?"
well, what is wrong with you and me?

and

the wonders of nature all under our control
yet we have so little insight into the nature of our souls

And that chorus is perfection! It's got the title as bookends, and is propelled in the middle by an acceleration with the inner rhyme:

it's time we start with the human heart

And then the final verse answers the question posed by the first two choruses, and invites the listener to take action without finger-pointing.

All in all, an amazing write.


David - It is always nice to have other writers "get it" (and mention "it"). I know Greg will appreciate that as well... Thanks for such a nice commentary...

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