Originally Posted By: Tano Music
ES:

Nice, nice work.
I favor simple, uncrowded melody lines like you've written. Your highly evocative lyric isn't overshadowed by a backtrack that is trying to do too much.

I loved that slooping-down vocal element "to come"

I'll also say that you are 'brave' to write something from a woman's POV...can be very tricky!

Only constructive comment I'd give you...I think you let BIAB write the ending 2 bars, but I think you could probably come up with something more innovative and less predictable there.

Otherwise, well-done!! Enjoyed it alot!


Thanks for stopping by and having a listen. I appreciate the comments.