You can make anything work. wink

But shifting the beat like you do in this tune gives the feeling the G in the third bar is being held to long. Paste the following ABC notation onto the text editor control on this page and you can see and hear the difference:

X: 1
T: Ed's Tune
M: 4/4
L: 1/4
K: C
Q: 120
E/2F/2 | G G G/2F/2 E | c2 G2 | E/2F/2 G G G/2F/2 | E D2 ||

X: 1
T: Ed's Tune Altered
M: 4/4
L: 1/4
K: C
Q: 120
E/2F/2 | G G G/2F/2 E | c2 G E/2F/2 | G G G/2F/2 | E D3 ||


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?