Originally Posted By: rayc
The unexpected phrasing of longer lines reminds me of Grant McLennan of the Go-Betweens' solo work.
Your voice becomes more certain and on task as the song progresses.
"Closer than a tattoo" is a very effective image.


Thank you- I`ll have to check out that singer.

Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude
Nice one, Robert! As always a good write.

Over all the vocal sounded good, and the vocal harmonies are very effective.

Nice production also, starting out with just the piano works well, and I like the way you brought in the pedal steel.

Good way to start out the new year!


Dave,
I`ve been trying different things to make mixes less muddy,so I hope its working.
Originally I had the whole band in at the start- it seemed to take away from the lyrics so thanks for the nod on the just piano opening.

Robert

Originally Posted By: Crossroads
Hello Robert,

what a great song title that's a really strong picture.. And a very nice song, too. Enjoyed the listen.

Cheers,

Stefan


Stefan,

Thanks for your listen and comments!


Robert