Hi Torrey

Song
Great groove particularly in verse section
Structure is pretty standard but with some imaginative twists and variations which keep the song interesting throughout
Mix / Production
nice mix
Quite an art. There’s a lot going on here and yet it never sounds cluttered.
Instrumentation
Some of the drum sounds could perhaps be revisited
Vocals
very nicely sung – lead and harmonies.
What I really liked
how you keep everything out the way of the melody in the verses
strong melodies in both sections
The rthm gtr (if I’m not wrong its the ‘True’ pattern – 2 and then pushed before 4 )
The pause and restart
What you might like to return to
not sure that the intro section or the gtr solo (2 30 – 2 45) add a great deal
Lead gtr a bit busy for my tastes here and there
The lyric could perhaps be improved
Overall impression
very strong composition and production
An example of just what is possible!

all the best,

Marc

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