Janne,

Really Pop!
Intro. is very nice.
Really uplifting!
The melody of the synth sound that appears 3 times in the interlude parts is very good.
I think that it is the correct answer that you reworked the accompaniment.
I did not listen to the original, but I guess it is probably getting much better now.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi