Another essay in values and value - thanks.
I think the 1st beat/note is too sudden - I reckon you could fade in the 1st bar.
The same is true of your 1st sung note - loud & sudden.
the blend of organic and electronic is pretty cool. The melody works well and you sing well.
By the way loosing - refers to letting some thing loose as opposed to losing which refers to misplacing etc.
Best use of evanescent since the band Evanescence.


Cheers
rayc
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