Nice one..chorus is Brilliant, lyrics strong write, vocals are strong clear and suit this genre to a T.
I agree with Floyd on the brightness, and I found it a bit busy instrument wise.
Your voice would have been more prominent with less going on, as you have a strong clear vocal so why bury it.
This is a constructive critique and I hope you take it as that.
Thanks for the listen and kind words,
not offended but noooooooo!!!
let me indulge by piling on the tracks, I usually do sparse arrangements
I want this to sound like a train comin' thru
there are some dynamics with things dropping in and out
I noticed the Soundcloud visual looks almost maxed out all thru,
maybe it normalized (whut) when it also messed up my lead vocal!
thank you for the compliments