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Nice song.

I'm not sure what's causing it, but there's some seriously odd artifacts starting at 1:40.

When the lead guitar comes in at 2:06, it overpowers the vocals.

The claps are a good idea - perhaps you could bring them in earlier?

The song cuts before the fade is complete - you might want to extend it to past the end of the fade.


Have you considered using Band in a Box to create your backing tracks? Adding pro bass, drums and lead guitar would take the song to that "next level."


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?