Originally Posted By: VideoTrack
Hi Noel. This is fantastic. I am most impressed with the phrasing.

The harmony in the last verse gave a sensational unexpected added dimension.

I really liked the rhyming style using on lines 3 and 6.

Moreover, how brilliant is this:
"You could have been an angel
Dressed in threads of rainbow"

Excellent, everywhere.

Trev


I don't normally quote someone else's review, but Trev pretty much said exactly what I was thinking.

Excellent!