The backing seems pretty tidy though there's a lot of string noise in RealTrack 2552.
The stereo image is good too.
I mentioned my concerns regarding your vocal tracks so won't go into them again.
Lyrically I'm confused about a song addressed to new born that is believed, generally, to have become an adult. I don't understand the many positions on trinity, monotheism etc. and this one made me even more lost.


Cheers
rayc
"What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe